Tips for a good pitch.

“Dance is the hidden language of the soul”, Martha Graham.

A few days ago I watched a documentary about a production of a new dance performance. It started with a charming introduction of the choreographer. We see him while he is walking his dog in the park. He tells – as he throws a stick for his dog to catch – that he has been a dancer his whole life. He performed in productions of major choreographers in big theaters. As a kid he had been an introvert and was very shy. His mother suggested to him to take ballet lessons. Since the moment he started to dance, he realized he loved it. Ever since, it brought him so much joy and ultimately it has become his way to express himself to the world. During his walk in the park he stretches himself and he practices dance movements. The dog follows him, happily running with the stick in his mouth.

I wish for anyone who is preparing to give a pitch about him or herself to watch this documentary. Because this pitch is so perfect, the image is clear; this man is a ballet dancer, it means everything to him and it’s the joy of his life. It doesn’t surprise us that this man is nowadays a world renowned choreographer. There is no light between the introduction and the rest of the movie, as it is convincingly aligned with the story it conveys.

I have often been asked to judge  pitches of start-ups. In a good pitch the entrepreneur explains what the problem is the start-up focusses on and how she or he wants to solve it. In this context I always advice that for a good pitch to work, make it personal. Tell something about yourself, your education and your experiences. Because if you do so, you will find out that it is easier to make a connection with your audience. Make it specific, by telling something about your childhood or the values your parents brought you up with. Share with the audience what you are curious about and what you would like to find out. Share your dreams about the future.

Of course, you don’t have to tick all the boxes when you deliver a pitch. However, you need to do your homework properly. Know your strengths. You must convince the audience that the problem you try to solve matters to you deeply, and that you are the right person to do so.

Like the choreographer in the documentary. He creates a new performance based on all his earlier experiences in life. He has no doubts.

About the Author

Akkie Okma, technical advisor at YY Goshti and an executive coach at Okma Advice, provides professional consultancy services to emerging startups. Okma has dedicated her life to youth empowerment and toward building their progressive growth in society.